The main difference between the two pieces I chose is that Dempsey and Firpo by Bellows is grayscale while The Fall of Phaeton by Sir Rubens is colored.
Ruben’s piece uses stronger counter lines around separate objects whereas Bellows uses the contrast of the primarily black background with the lighter shaded foreground objects to create form. Both art pieces use value to produce a smoother and defined texture shown perfectly by the muscles of the horses and the back of the defeated boxer. Also implied overhead lighting in both(the ray of light in The Fall of Phaeton and the overhead spotlight shining down vertically on the boxers). The many spotlights in a boxing ring causes Bellows to use various shades of gray control the shadows throughout the piece. As you move away from the ray of light in The Fall of Phaeton the shades of all colors darken from the lack of implied light. Though focal points are usually in one place, Rubens use of kinetic movement with the implied light effectively extended the focal point across the painting. Both pictures are asymmetrically balanced because the focus from the action is sent to one side of each despite the amount of objects used.
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Dear Shayne,
These essays require that each student read the chapter assigned and then transfer the information to the works selected by each student.
That information should include:
Features of each work
Definitions of the terms used as they are appropriately assigned to the artworks
Suitably discuss the essay question thoroughly
Exhibit, Evalutate, Identify and probelm solve through original discussion a transfer of information as it applies to each artwork in a comparison and contrast essay.
1. This essay does a thorough job of comparing and contrasting the two artworks in original discussion.
2. The essay fails to list the features of the artworks (see the rubric in Black Board)
3. It's organization is a bit loose and reads like a laundry list. Perhaps break down the design elements into subjects that have good transitional sentences.
4. Define terms. Very important. although the essay uses a number of art terms from the book there is not page number reference or definition.
5. this essay is supposed to be about the design elements. Leave out the discussion about Principles (a-symmetry) until next essay.
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